Submitted March 16th, 2008
I remember you submitted this a while ago… my suggestions from then still stand: just get rid of the text altogether.
this is a design website friend.
eeeesh, drawings not too bad, but, honestly, who would ever wear a shirt that has text speak on it? especially with something that is supposed to be poetic or profound? plus, the worst thing in the world is yellow glow around red text. lose it all together.
get rid of the txt! and if you repost try making your a sky from scratch, might improve the design aspect
WORTHLESS SACK OF CRAP
Thanks for all your kind words