Submitted July 30th, 2010
I like guns, so I have to like this one :o)
Why don’t you try doing the dove way bigger and I would take out that splatter, the one coming out the gun, it doesn’t look quite good to me, in fact it looks very weird.
I do like the concept and the shirt color. I’m liking the shadow of the gun you put there. I think it needs a little work, but I still like the concept.
I’m gonna echo D4N13L’s comments.
what do you mean with echo? sorry i’m from germany :-P
Lol, an echo is when something repeats, right? You stand in a canyon and yell “I rule” and “I rule” echoes.
When I said that I was echoing his comments, it means that I agree with his comments – I think the dove looks really odd to me and it should be bigger.
I also LOVE the concept and the shirt color, haha.
I think you’re definitely on the right track, and I’d love to see you revamp this to see it taken to its true potential.