SheViper SheViper Artist

adding a background would be good! +1

Karyn2002 Karyn2002 Human from United States

Ok, it’s hard to tell because there’s no closeup, but I HATE hate the illustration of the woman – the beanstalk looks like it’s coming out of her head, her arms are coming out of the ody at an awkward angle, her boobs look misshapen and it looks like we’re seeing up her skirt at her panties.

Other than that, I like it – I just beg that you work on/reconsider the woman.

shirtBoy12 shirtBoy12 Artist

The beanstalk is coming out of her head. It’s surrealism. None of it is by accident.

Karyn2002 Karyn2002 Human from United States

Ok, I think the execution of it coming out of her head could be done much better, and all my other objections still stand — and they’re why I can’t vote for this, sorry. I love the aspects that aren’t her.

so interesting, its surrealism

sweetP sweetP Artist

i like it a lot, but i just couldnt justify wearing a shirt with a womans underwear showing on it.

jeremiahwasa jeremiahwasa Artist from Queensland, Australia

Interesting, looks good

thestray thestray Artist from United States

The rendering looks very muddy and unfinished. And while I understand you weren’t going for realism, I don’t think it’s stylized in a very appealing way, especially the anatomy. The beanstalk growing out of the woman’s head could’ve been portrayed in a more interesting way as well.
So I think it’s an interesting concept, but the execution is just not there yet.

shirtBoy12 shirtBoy12 Artist

I appreciate the critiques. I’d also like a critique of my “alice” design…I do vectors too. These are more painterly.

d42n d42n Artist from West Java, Bandung, Indonesia

nice illo

ajRAINE ajRAINE Artist

Er…I love everything, well, besides the troll, I mean woman….

the woman looks funny, but i still love to wear this shirt.. i like surrealism. voted!

BenjaminPhantom BenjaminPhantom Artist from Florida, United States

I love the surrealist aspect to this and the disproportionate body parts. And, yes the woman does bug me a little bit too. Otherwise, nicely done.

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