this is very cool

brainboxz brainboxz Artist from Indonesia

Simple, quiet and strong +1

ChipCheezum ChipCheezum Artist

Okay, I admit that my comments were pretty dicky. Constructive criticism instead: I think the comp on the shirt would be more effective if the type had more of a correlation between the imagery. There’s a little bit of tension with the type since it has such tight leading, along with the fact that it’s overlapping that bottom tree by a little bit, but not a lot. If the type were in a different spot, I think the design would flow a lot better, since the white space on the shirt would flow from the bottom left, up through the middle between the trees, and up to the top right.

TheTank TheTank Artist

I am an educated graphic designer with experience in the field, and I dont like to be put down by a student. I put everything in its place for a reason, not just because. For me, the correlation is very understandable. The branches represent words, words that grow and grow, and some words/branches that are not needed in life. If you dont get that that is too bad. Some people may not like my designs, and that is fine, but I dont know of anyone who would ever be as rude to a fellow graphic designer as you are.

“How dare you criticize my work! It is perfect and amazing and beautiful and if you don’t get it then you’re a sad sot! Besides, I am older than you, so neener neener.”

I agree, TheTank. This shirt is gorgeous, it really speaks to me! I’m really diggin’ the deep metaphors behind the design. Keep up the good work, champ!

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