Poetry of the Earth (early stages)

posted by DaveCP • 4 years ago

I’ve got this design that I’ve adapted from a poster I did on environmentalism. First example is some saturation changes and brush erasing and second is the original. Any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

3 Replies

wotto wotto Artist from CA, United States

Hi Dave CP
You are trying to attach google email attachments and that will not work, you need to right click the images and select “copy image url” from a source that stores images on the internet.

DaveCP DaveCP Human from United States

Sorry about that, here is the original. Thanks again.

ejiboo ejiboo Artist from United States

this could be worked on so that the colors and imagery work more off of each other. while i like to see different styles incorporated into single designs, these styles are too conflicting, imo. the earth has a cut out of paper feel and while the black shapes are obviously silhouettes they don’t give me the same feeling and feel too different from the rest of the design. i also think you should try some different color palates full of complementing colors – i find this black very harsh.

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