My TDKR Entry - Please crit

posted by qetza • 5 years ago

Hey everyone, here’s a reworked design of my first entry (The first didn’t make the cut). I’m ok with it and all, just want to avoid a second time since the deadline is very near. So let me know what you think with your opnions./crits. Thanks!


13 Replies

pinkstorm pinkstorm Artist from Philippines

awesome work. was this subbed already?

qetza qetza Artist from United States

No not yet, I’ll most likely sub it Monday. Thanks

Ingkong Ingkong Artist from Philippines

very nice!!!

wotto wotto Artist from CA, United States

I like it but batman’s right eye seems a little lost.

qetza qetza Artist from United States

Thanks Ingkong!

@ Wotto – Good call… I just subbed it this morning too. I’ll edit it and resub.Thanks for the crit!

Ampix0 Ampix0 Artist from NJ, United States

I think batman looks slightly feminine. I like the design, but as a critique, he looks somewhat feminine, I would make him more rigid and turn those curved lines into straight-ish bends. Also his right arm (left side of image) seems to be a little large in length and maybe a little wide possibly.

qetza qetza Artist from United States

@ Ampix0 – Thanks for the crit, I’ll see what I can do

JustPetrucci JustPetrucci Artist from Washington, United States

I would say plant his left foot (Viewer’s right) a little more firmly. It kind looks like he’s about to fall over… ;P

@ wotto: Did you mean Batman’s right eye, or the viewer’s right eye? Because I can’t see his LEFT eye, but I can tell his right eye is there…but if you mean the VIEWER’S right eye, then yeah…

qetza qetza Artist from United States

@ JustPetrucci – Another valid point. Thanks

pi79 pi79 Artist from On, Canada

Good, only Batman seems to be pulling Catwomans hair

qetza qetza Artist from United States

@ pi79 – Got it Thanks!

Thanks again to everyone for the great feedback! I just subbed it and crossing my fingers.

sithsoccer sithsoccer Artist from MO, United States

Good luck.

qetza qetza Artist from United States

It’s been approved and is up for voting…Thanks again guys!
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