Intrepid Intrepid Artist

Congrats on your first DBH submission!
This is a cool pattern, but its too repetitive. Its hard to look at because theres nothing except this pattern, and I feel like you need to add a bit of variety.

this looks pretty cool

nienie nienie Artist

thank you for the critique intrepid :-)
i will take that into consideration for my next design
though i would like to point out
that if you ever been INTO active wear they have funky, too much, repetitve, design
and they sell it lie 50 dollars per shirt :-)
but ur right
i need to add variety
so thank u

looks nice :D

Arezogak Arezogak Human

I like the repetitiveness, because it reminds me of an optical illusion. Good job girl and good luck.

thestray thestray Artist from United States

A pattern doesn’t need variety, they’re SUPPOSED to be repetitive, that’s what makes it a pattern.

eembach eembach Human from TX, United States

Lol @ thestray, I think a good middle ground would be to add a couple more colors in the mix and maybe tilt the pattern. Keep the pattern intact but do something to spruce it up would be my 2 cents.

pashy pashy Human

I love this design! it’s so creative and different.. it has a very vintage feel to it! definitely got my vote :)
good job!!

nienie nienie Artist

@eembach actually this t-shirt competition has alot of rules
one of the rules is I CANT make it more then 3 colors as an “all-over” design (meaning its all over the shirt) i tried to stick to 3 light shades :-)

nienie nienie Artist

but i totally agree with you @eembach :-)

eembach eembach Human from TX, United States

Ah i see, I’m not all that familiar with the color rules, which may be why I’m always saying there should be more color….

Such a nice and different design! I absolutely love it!!!! :)

ghezala ghezala Human

I love the swirls, and good use of color!!! Great Job!!!

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