it’s interesting, but there’s a couple problems you should address. first off, i could be wrong because i can’t see the detail close enough to tell if you just used some serious halftoning, but it looks like too many colors for an all-over print. DBH tries to keep the color limit at 3 for all-over prints (so you need to keep it off of the sleeves, hem, and collar). Even if it were 3 colors though, the placement is just all wrong. It doesn’t look good there to me at all. Why not just try to center it on the front of the shirt?