I really don’t like the text, but the drawing is cool! I would just lose the text entirely. But if you don’t want to, you need some serious kerning, on your ‘h’s and ‘e’ especially.
I like the sad and tired interpretation of Botticelli’s Venus, but I am 100% with Mymil that the text needs to go. “Shellshock” is so clear in the illustration, you don’t have to explain what you intended — it’s in her eyes.
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I really don’t like the text, but the drawing is cool! I would just lose the text entirely. But if you don’t want to, you need some serious kerning, on your ‘h’s and ‘e’ especially.
xD
photoshock/shellshop
what if your connective tissue and the shell are combined? that’d be stressing for sure
I like this…I would wear it.
should have penciled the text
I like the sad and tired interpretation of Botticelli’s Venus, but I am 100% with Mymil that the text needs to go. “Shellshock” is so clear in the illustration, you don’t have to explain what you intended — it’s in her eyes.