You definitely have potential with these characters, but the composition is not working for me. What if you tried stacking them, as each was sitting on the shoulders of the previous one?

Thanks. The intention of placement was to show the characters being squeezed under the arms. I’ll post a link to more photos very soon. But, thanks for the feedback.

I like your style. each one of the characters could have his own story. +1

Much appreciated! I’ll keep that in mind.

wow supercool, as the other say you should definitely jump into book illustrations

cool character ..

Thank you!