It’s nice and important that you take your cultural background into consideration when designing but I’ll be honest with you. I think you need to work a lot more on this if you’re looking to get this printed. There is just not enough detail for me to tell what’s going on. I mean I can tell what it is now but it took me a while. What you want is people to react right away. If you are going with simple, you need to really take a look at how simple you can go without people saying “what the hell am I looking at?” Anyway, just my two cents. I hope you take criticism as a chance to improve. I know I do. It’s the only way to get better. Keep on working and you’ll get there man.