Honestly the vertical and horizontal stripes breaks the design down.
All the other lines are good, aswell as the placement of “kiss”.
The red one is def better than the white one.
I know you can do better ;)

yeah the stripes to many great placement!!! great color great to see a differnt color other then black…

I like the look of this design. Nice work.

I like the white T,simple & nice .voted mate

I love plaid things and i love kiss and you combined the two and made them AWESOME! good work! =]

una versión moderna de diseños de Kiss =)!

“Honestly the vertical and horizontal stripes breaks the design down.
All the other lines are good, aswell as the placement of “kiss”.
The red one is def better than the white one.
I know you can do better ;)”

+1

actually it would even look nicer, if the logo would go up not down like now, you know, positive attitude … like it anyways +1

it’s pretty rad..!!! vote for this

I know this contest is over but this is so killer. it’s so different from pretty much everything out there. Good luck!

Your work is very interesting. I love this design as well as the Geisha.