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Memories of You (are Written in Smoke)

by LoftySofty

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printed big on the front and up the shoulder.
for a larger view go here: http://www.flickr.com/photos/loftysofty/2667019656/sizes/o/in/set-72157594523749380/

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12 Comments

116353
said 6 months ago

Two things that can be changed for making this even better…
one: the smoke coming from the cigarette should be more purplish to match the other smoke. Now it’s looking kinda weird.
second: In the smoke everything is kinda bleu-ish and purple. what is good but the HAND in the cloud is colored :O for what reason? In my opinion it distracts.
Anyway
Nice work with the lady, the placement and those dripping clouds are fantastic… :D
good luck ;) +1
got time? check mine

EDIT:
I rather have a critique to learn from than nothing or a comment like: great design.
It wasn’t meant to be unrespectfull.

17330
said 6 months ago

Great illustration!

97233
said 6 months ago

nice illustration!

i will have to agree with INTRO though, i dont understand why the smoke is white from the cig but purple coming from her mouth? is this intentional.. maybe i just dont understand.

plus i think this works best for the women : ) i think its quite a feminine concept.

good luck with it! hope my vote helps you towards your second print! +1

118650
said 6 months ago

^Could these people be any more douche-y? Don’t critique a design that’s already up for scoring. You either vote or don’t vote, but trying to suggest changes to a design that’s already finished and scoring is pretty rude.

Personally, this design’s not my cup of tea, but it just irks me so much to see people do that that I had to comment.

82
said 6 months ago

Just roll with it, bros. Don’t worry.

12206
said 6 months ago

really nice illustration, I fully support INTRO’s comment, you need to work on the coloring, the illustration is just awesome!

6042
said 6 months ago

Way cool +1

13474
said 6 months ago

awesome illustration man..nice idea to…great colors and placement…very nice..+1
please go check my stuff later and vote if u like ^^

Human_thumbnail_unknown
said 6 months ago

Nice. The coloring on the hand is the bone structure, right? I guess that would symbolize death. :P

108463
said 6 months ago

cool!!

123076
said 6 months ago

Great!

Human_thumbnail_unknown
said 3 months ago

isnt too emo? :S

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