Cool I like it! If you ever do one of these again, write in the direction the body/shape is flowing. Look at the tip of the higher wing, see how your words flow with it verse the tail where you stay generally horizontal. It’d look more interesting to see the directions the words go. You have some words with more weight than others, which can help give you the feeling of depth, this can help you make the body look closer than the wings. This looks great!! I would love to see you do more!