Cool I like it!
If you ever do one of these again, write in the direction the body/shape is flowing. Look at the tip of the higher wing, see how your words flow with it verse the tail where you stay generally horizontal. It’d look more interesting to see the directions the words go. You have some words with more weight than others, which can help give you the feeling of depth, this can help you make the body look closer than the wings.
This looks great!! I would love to see you do more!

It’s been seen before, but nicely composed. +1.

Please check mine if you can. Thanks!

I didnt copy anyone sir. it just came out in my head.. I check your site and its awesome! your typo is very good! my “random thoughts” is all handwritten and its a pain to do it. but worth it… thanks for the vote brother! peace! =D

you stole my style .. haha jk, been around since the 70’s, I love doing type! You use it well!

great technique and idea

kewl+1

it’s beautiful :)

wow this one is so simple but really well executed. I love typography! you got my vote man

cool…. check mine pls…

Nice fly~ Vote!!!

Awesome, I totally need this one printed!

I think this is awesome! It would have also been cool to move the peace sign closer to the heart and made it a different color but what you have is great!

This is great, voted.

thanks for the vote sir!

cool typo concept man. i hope this wins. +1

i like the placement on the first one! well executed.

really nice +1

must agree with previous commentators, the wrap-around is key! votes

wow! pretty cool design dude….love the simplicity, placement and the typo based on some random thoughts…great job! v+

Like this one a lot – really love the wrap-around!