Nice image, pretty girl, but the hair looks more “float away” than “fly away”, like she’s underwater. That would be fine if all her hair looked that way instead of just some of it. Even the circles look a bit like bubbles except for their placement relative to her. But all that is just secondary. The main problem is this is just a picture of a girl’s face — why would I want to wear this girl’s face on my chest all day? For some people a pretty face is enough but for me it needs something to add interest. A setting, a story, something. The eyes looking up and away are step in the right direction. You have obvious talent, please keep the designs coming. Almost nobody gets printed their first time (either here or at any other shirt site) so don’t get discouraged.