i love this one. I don’t think it should be changed at all.

I really love the artwork… though I think the placement could be a little lower.

thankx peoples!! this is a first time i enter my design for t shirt contests.

this works out as well.. its the clean lines that make it work… I’d go for the color one though, i think lines need to be a bit bolder with a white background to stand out more

I disagree with the others. This works really well on a white shirt with simple black lines. Gets my vote :)

I really it this one!!! Very complex, but simple…nice composition…

i actually like this one better..

I like the line work ..maybe a grey dot pattern in the headphones would make it pop…or a bright tee and the headphones in white.I’ll vote for it though I do like the work

it has potential,.a little more color and tweak