Submitted November 20th, 2012
from United Kingdom
illustration is great nad very well done, but the mouth is bothering me a lot.
@deaddreamer thanks for the critique :) care to elaborate on why it’s bothering you, how I can improve it etc?
@warren: you made basically a real octopus, but octopi don’t have a mouth there – it would not be a problem if the beast would be more deriving from a real octopus from its other features – like this it just looks wrong (at least for me).
hope this helps!
Well done lad ! Very nicely composed on the tee and great linework…. + one
thanks for the comments and critique guys :)
I love it.xx\
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