illustration is great nad very well done, but the mouth is bothering me a lot.

@deaddreamer thanks for the critique :) care to elaborate on why it’s bothering you, how I can improve it etc?

NICE ONE!+1

@warren: you made basically a real octopus, but octopi don’t have a mouth there – it would not be a problem if the beast would be more deriving from a real octopus from its other features – like this it just looks wrong (at least for me).

hope this helps!

Well done lad ! Very nicely composed on the tee and great linework…. + one

thanks for the comments and critique guys :)

I love it.xx\

awesome