You invited me to critique your shirt, here i post :)
I would have composited the shirt with the stylised elements you used [ Batman arm, Bane face, Gotham, crater ] in a different way
Cause in a first time, I interpreted this as if it is Batman who destroys Gotham by catching an inoffensive Bane due to the lack of arms: Meaning ‘Batman does what he wants without care of Gotham’
Then, I interpreted as ‘the true power of Gotham is Batman’ by Batman’s arm which is strong enough to have this stylised representation toward stylised Gotham
So finally i think i see it as you want people to
Hello, you invite em to critique your design so i am gonna do.
It’s a nice one because i always like the strenght of the black and white silhouettes. You could maby have use better the negative space in advance of your message. The only thing i don’t like is the bats silhouettes that looks like you put them anywhere without any second thought.
At the end i belevie that is looks much better on the black t-shirt.
Very good, nice homage to the artist of many of Alfred Hitchcock’s movie posters, Saul Bass. Bane looks very insect-like upon the rising (and almost zombie like) arm of Batman from the ground, as if Bane were some poisonous insect (which is very fitting)! Nice one!!!
Strong design. For simplicity you could have the actual glove of batman with the spikes instead of the bats. agree. tilt the arm to the left to make it more dynamic. reminds me of the hand covering the moon in Disney’s Sleepy Hollow. Great use of shape and contrast.
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simple and creative! you should get more votes! +1
Please visit and judge my design:)
http://www.designbyhumans.com/vote/detail/203279
Simplicity often times is best on a shirt. I Love the concept here!
Nice. Reminds me of a Polish movie poster design.
You invited me to critique your shirt, here i post :)
I would have composited the shirt with the stylised elements you used [ Batman arm, Bane face, Gotham, crater ] in a different way
Cause in a first time, I interpreted this as if it is Batman who destroys Gotham by catching an inoffensive Bane due to the lack of arms: Meaning ‘Batman does what he wants without care of Gotham’
Then, I interpreted as ‘the true power of Gotham is Batman’ by Batman’s arm which is strong enough to have this stylised representation toward stylised Gotham
So finally i think i see it as you want people to
Hello, you invite em to critique your design so i am gonna do.
It’s a nice one because i always like the strenght of the black and white silhouettes. You could maby have use better the negative space in advance of your message. The only thing i don’t like is the bats silhouettes that looks like you put them anywhere without any second thought.
At the end i belevie that is looks much better on the black t-shirt.
Very saul bass – not sure of mini bane though – what your favorite submission
+1 from me! great work! could you please visit my design and let me know what you think?> It would be great to get feeback from other artists. thanks!
http://www.designbyhumans.com/vote/detail/203217
I think the composition is amazing and the black and white design works great with this design. +1 :)
nice concept :)
love your design. it’s up there with this one
I will tell my friends to vote for you :)
AWESOME.....concept ,plus +1
I like this a lot. I love the complexity that seems so simplistic. It gives a feeling similar to Genndy Tartaskovsky’s Samurai Jack. Very clever.
Feel free to return the favor,
http://www.designbyhumans.com/vote/detail/202893
Very good, nice homage to the artist of many of Alfred Hitchcock’s movie posters, Saul Bass. Bane looks very insect-like upon the rising (and almost zombie like) arm of Batman from the ground, as if Bane were some poisonous insect (which is very fitting)! Nice one!!!
@OPTIKblok i am glad you like it bro :D
It looks like a propaganda poster. I love the energy. and the simple effective graphic.
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waiting for your vote
+1
Nice one mate..keep’t up
Very cool “all-over” design. Kinda Like Saul Bass with grit.
Strong design. For simplicity you could have the actual glove of batman with the spikes instead of the bats. agree. tilt the arm to the left to make it more dynamic. reminds me of the hand covering the moon in Disney’s Sleepy Hollow. Great use of shape and contrast.
@mikeguevy hehe thanks alot bro