man, i like it! sketch style very cool, and the siluett also! Only thing buging me is base tee’s color – i would have it in greeen maybeee.

Damn fine design! I would wear this tee if it was a colour other than baby blue!! Green or gray or beige or something!

fresh

any shirt with a CS Lewis reference deserves an A++ in my book any day

hey! check out my latest submission “Blooming Imagination” please and vote if you like. I love your shirt! Would like to get it!

fully agreed. the dragonball reference was completely unintentional , but its so very, unfortunately apparent.

thanks for the crit.

I really enjoy it, but I can’t lie – I clicked because I thought that was a dragon ball up front. Really dig, but I think there could be a few tweaks in position to make it a little more interesting.

lookin’ good, bought it!