Hello , I invite you to critique my design

http://www.designbyhumans.com/vote/detail/203111

hello

Hello Victoria!

I am Wagner Nogueira, Brazilian comics artist. I entered now this difficult and fun world of designs for shirts. I like so much of your designs (already voted and commented) and today, in addition to introduce myself, i came to ask a little help on a challenge that i am participating. See the post on my blog that you will better understand:

http://bit.ly/yS4ASc

Thank you! You’re awesome!
Big Hug!

your really good!!!

Thanks for your support!!