Need your help for the design!

The design is good but i have a few points of critique.

- maybe you can make the lines more like they are sketched, think that would look better.

- add some color, its a bit pale like this

and defenitly go for the white one!

Great work, defenitly my vote if you submit. n_n

do some coloring… and if you make the lines sketchy… be sure to make the bolder.

and you could make the face a little smaller.. i think it’s a little too big..

very nice, i think like kay said, make the lines look more sketchy : )

also i like the dark one, how every i think you should try it on blue : )

++ on the horizontal lines, try some music notes : ) i think it would work nice, and will follow the theme.

also maybe bring the ripples bellow the guitar out covering more of the bottom space, as this is fairly empty, and maybe iether fill more of the spaces of make it smaller, : ) hope this helps! : ) good luck

everything they said here above ;)
If you color some watercolor would be great (fits the theme and watery look)
But don’t overdo it
good luck

yeah what they said ,but i think those circles (which you copied&pasted)dont work either and i like those clouds, clock and birds better then other stuffs

Nice drawing Designs_maker…

how about adding a photo color effect on white background T ?

i like Mermaids ;)

cheers

I like white color~
Your design is cool~

Waiting for ur update,
cheers :)

Maybe it’s just me, but I feel that there are too many blank spots on the shirt…or maybe you can scootch the items in there a little closer to each other…or even add a couple more things in there. looking at the design again, the top portion placement seems fine…but some of those small things at the bottom of the shirt looks like they’re just spread out too far from each other..hope this helps.

Thanks for the great comments everyone I will add these things in this design as soon as possible because my final exams are going & I have also work for the design (as freelancer)………..