its not a finished product, i need help finishing it
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bluemonkey
i’ve been toying with the idea of adding alot of like abstract vector art to it but im not sure.
anyone got any ideas, iether on what to add, or what they think of it so far.
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thanks for the help. ill give it a try,
im trying to go for something a bit more than that though.
its meant to show
being in the hand of music and drifting into a better state of mind. but tbh i dont really want this to be REALLY obvious. thats why i added the abstract paint.
im guessing, it makes no sence ><
I like the first version more than the butterfly silhouette, are you using photoshop? you should set the butterfly layer/design layer to “Multiply” over the man, it will give you a more realistic idea of your design, as the white will be the actual tshirt colour etc. But good work so far!
I feel the butterflies stand out too much in the second version.
Maybe make the butterflies that light grey color you used in the background, this way they won’t stand out as much and they will blend in with the background.
Wow…i like ur idea with butterflies…yes,can u just blend the butterflies with background!…but it’s pretty & fresh concept,Man hope this gonna b a cool T
Cheers
thanks so much for your help every one.
im worried it looks a bit messy? does it?
anyone got any ideas of anything i can add to it : )
thanks for vote/support, my internet have problem with photobucket for some stupid reasons so i couldnt check your design sorry
Your texture behind is fine and the first butterfly position seemed better to me, the big one are too evident… I know, maybe you made them bigger because you felt empty in the bottom once the hand and girl removed but for me less is better. Once finished groupe everything in a folder of layers, than duplicate this folder (so you can come back to the first one), flatten you duplicated folder (so you get a unique layer) and than apply a multiply layer blend to it… the result over the white tee will be more realistic… Keep trying different things… and you will see for yourself…
thanks fabio, i am well aware of the power mulitiply has : ) probably one of my favourite filters on photoshop : ) thanks soooo much for your help.
ill get a update up asap.
ALSO
i really liked this design i done below.
however its not done very well, have you got and help on how i could improve this? : )
made a few updates. i had to redo the abstract paint bits. for some reason i used the rubber insted of a mask : (. thats what i get for working early hours of the morning i guess.
so yer : ) let me no what ya think people
It’s getting better and better. I like it.
But there’s something about that black pattern situated at one corner of the tee that I’m not really getting. The black pattern looks like a silhouette of a person though. Maybe you can somehow turn that black figure into a person with his right arm out and little black butterflies emerging from the silhouette of his hand.
The texture is clearer and nicer… the butterflies are more natural… now I guess it is a question of taste but concerning the concept you presented us I guess you pretty much got it…
latest update :)
you can see i took you advice on using a person in the black : ) THANKS
It looks better than what I had in mind! Well done with the silhouette of the guy, it looks really well-drawn. I wish I had such skills.
It’s getting better and better.& cooler" like the new version dude.it gives a idea like "Freedom’..cool design,lets c wt others say too
cheers
WOW last one is great bluemonkey! I think it will also looks better at black t-shirt with different colors, otherwise it is also nice!
Yeah its looking pretty good now dude, maybe try a few different colour combos, like replace the purple with another colour, a simple way to get good colours is to open up the “Pantone: Solid Coated colour book” and select colours from there, sometimes I like to have a limited palette. Not sure where the colour book is in photoshop, but in illustrator its under “window” > “swatch library” > Colour book > Pantone solid coated…
I think thats correct, doing it from memory! too lazy to open up illustrator atm haha, good luck with your design!
a couple of people said i should try different colours, i took design makers idea of trying a black tee, for this i didnt feel the purple worked.
what do people think?
It looks awesome! I think the starry effect that you did on the human figure gave it a little more depth which is really cool. It looks as though he’s floating on a cloud. lol.
Wow that effect is pretty cool. I’m not sure which one I like the most, I liked the purple one as well. They both have different feels.
I really like the final one, i would hand so some bird silhouttes and explore the idea with birds instead of butterflies. Like it was a scene where he was setting them free, great execution though
honestly i like the 3rd to the last one, the one before you added the guy, i thought that was the best… but it’s still tough to get a guy to put on a shirt with butterflies… But chicks will dig it. Good designs
i like the 1st one elements.
i like the 2nd silhouette but they r too big.
i like the last technique but prefer more than one technique in one shirt.
Love the black version. Maybe bring some splatters/ splattery scrolls, or the such, real faint, like a discharge ink behind the figure and the butterflies. Just to tie all the elements together. Love the design!
The third effort was doing it for me. The butterflies merged well with the purple and the black splatter hinted at something to come. I think something needs to come from the area of the ‘splatter’ but not sure the figure is the right move unless your increase the figure size and make the figure out of splatter. Not sure if i’m making myself clear but good luck.
i really like the top first design. just needs a darker shirt color and u should submit
Maybe try without the hand and the girl and butterflies totally on white (the white from the shirt) like a silhouette…. ?? Dont know….