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LinusCunnBrea
posted by LinusCunnBrea • 8 months ago

Hi,

I just joined the site and I’ve been pouring over the forum looking for tips and advice on making art work so that I can apply for a store and/or a contest. I’ve read lots of helpful items from folks like Inked, Wotto, MeganDBH and others. Thank you guys for your helpfulness.

Pardon me if this is the incorrect place to post, but i was hoping to find some more direct tips and critiquing.

The art by itself

https://s3.amazonaws.com/s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/559116_wizzzxzxxitl7bwcksm3hirs0.png?AWSAccessKeyId=086M18W1MHNJR6M3X402&Expires=1393543834&Signature=GBM%2B7%2FDLQaBo2R7gmE8OijNhZM0%3D

The mock up

https://s3.amazonaws.com/s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/559116_xymssoyspyek0xuvjmmdfmgol.png?AWSAccessKeyId=086M18W1MHNJR6M3X402&Expires=1393543834&Signature=khbapaBZhw6xC1Ho9xTumhY8ULk%3D

the thumbnail

https://s3.amazonaws.com/s3images.coroflot.com/user_files/individual_files/559116_txbhq0tokvvpdyd3paxg6ulkm.png?AWSAccessKeyId=086M18W1MHNJR6M3X402&Expires=1393543922&Signature=EALQQObBirvBltyR1q788Pmmz7w%3D

These are all hand sketches that I edited with Photoshop. I’m trying make sure I’ve covered all the requirements of DBH (i.e. size, file type etc). But I’m totally interested in what people have to say about the art too.

3 Replies

Inked Inked Staff: Community Manager from California, United States

Unfortunately your links don’t work for me

LinusCunnBrea LinusCunnBrea Human from Cali, United States

MarcusRespawn MarcusRespawn Human from Goa, India

Looks incomplete in my opinion. More colors/depth maybe? and concept?

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