Critique - Apocalypse

thoregan
posted by thoregan • 11 months ago

Hello, i need you for critique my new design in works : Apocalypse, they need more work especially on the top, THanks you

4 Replies

iampayne iampayne Artist from New York, United States

I think you should make the skyline more prominent.

slamgirl65 slamgirl65 Artist from Michigan, United States

I like the composition, but it could use a touch more contrast. I also really like the point of view, like peering out through a hole in the wall. Really nice idea, have a you got a placement pic?

thoregan thoregan Artist from France

Hello, thanks for your comment, i have make a new version for this design :

And the placement version :

ZooeyChinaski ZooeyChinaski Artist from Poland

read about composition, because this one is unappealing ( is that even a word? sorry for my english, lol), you know what i mean? no matter how much work you put into rendering this, it still won’t be interesting because of the composition

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