Spiderheart - 2 Concepts. Which one do you think works better

Picserf
posted by Picserf • 1 year ago

First time submitting to DBH. I’m a bit nervous about it because I’ve spent a couple of days doing concepts and finally I have something(s) to show for it. After trying several different things, I have it down to two similar concepts. The name of the shirt would be Spiderheart and the options are:

And:

So, Humans, I’d like to know your thoughts and suggestions. Which of these do you think would work better on a t-shirt?

Best,

-Julio V.

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ADAMLAWLESS ADAMLAWLESS Artist from Johor Bahru, Malaysia

the webs too strong for both; the blue shirt is better, good luck :-)

Picserf Picserf Artist from California, United States

Thanks for your feedback Adam! I’ve been staring at the thing for so long I never realized this about the web. I worked on each element separately but never gave how all the elements fit together much consideration. Will post a revision sometime soon!
-J

ADAMLAWLESS ADAMLAWLESS Artist from Johor Bahru, Malaysia

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Maximillian Maximillian Staff: Sr Software Engineer from CA, United States

The orange one’s placement works really well for me though I like the blue shirt more. I don’t feel like the webs work as an all-over but that’s just my opinion.

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