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Please Critique My Design

adanawtn
posted by adanawtn • 1 year ago

I would love some feedback on my design before I submit it to DBH.
Any advice on how to make it better would be awesome. Thanks in advance!

6 Replies

jesssss jesssss Artist from Los Angeles: CA, United States

I believe it is great overall, I would take more time to work on it to update your thoughts on how you can add to it. Good luck!

pinkstorm pinkstorm Artist from Philippines

Hi adanawtn, your artwork looks clean. great lining. You could try adding up some colors on it perhaps, yellow gold or red combined. I’m not sure of the story behind this design? Can you give some thoughts on it? With regards to the skull, make it pop up by using shadows to get a feeling of depth on it. The hand gesture, i’m not sure if this site allows that, but try to make an alternative gesture for it just in case. Looking forward to seeing more updates of this design. :)

adanawtn adanawtn Human from Texas, United States

It’s supposed to be a satirical take on the Maneki-Neko. I was going for something along the lines of “Make your own luck.” I have version with the words on it, but I can’t figure out what font to use.

Thank you so much for your feedback. I’m going to try adding color to it.

pinkstorm pinkstorm Artist from Philippines

Oh i see, lol! that’s cute! Font isn’t essential though, you can add up a background if u like. Try putting your text on the title so people will easily get the idea. Good luck! :)

adanawtn adanawtn Human from Texas, United States

How about something like this:

jesssss jesssss Artist from Los Angeles: CA, United States

Its getting better, keep going

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