Limited Edition Tank Tops

WIP-NEED SOME ADVICE

PRABHITA
posted by PRABHITA • 1 year ago

oke,..this my second project,..
I just drawing some lips,..

please welcome to give some critique and advice to perfecting my work…

thanks…

8 Replies

FiftyQuid FiftyQuid Human from Canada

Is that the tongue in the middle? Not a fan of that. Plus you’ll probably get a call from The Rolling Stones about it. ;)

HardCandyGFX HardCandyGFX Artist from Czech Republic

@FiftyQuid Really? I don’t think the Rolling Stones can own a copyright on human anatomy. Haha!

wotto wotto Staff: Creative Director from CA, United States

Hi, the main problem with the design is that it is way more colors than is allowed for all over printing. read the 101 section for tips on what will and won’t get your submission accepted.

PRABHITA PRABHITA Artist from Purbalingga, Indonesia

@FiftyQuid: no no no….
@HardyCandyGFX : Yes I agree with you…
@wotto : oh,..oke,..I’ll fix it soon,.thanks,..

MrFourFingers MrFourFingers Artist from London, United Kingdom

Far too big. I do like some of the skills you are showing though

MrFourFingers MrFourFingers Artist from London, United Kingdom

Just to add if it’s going to be massive then maybe it should have insane detail making it more alluring and weird. There is an artists kicking about the web who has these amazing pencil illustrations of mouths/lips with bubbles and spit. They are fantastic and give you an idea of what is possible

PRABHITA PRABHITA Artist from Purbalingga, Indonesia

@MrFourFingers : Thanks for your advice sir,...

FiftyQuid FiftyQuid Human from Canada

You guys know I was kidding right? It’s a bit too Rocky Horror Picture Show for me.

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