Hello everyone! I will glad to hear some suggestions for my design

here the artwork

Hello everyone! I will glad to hear some suggestions for my design

here the artwork

Thanks a lot HardCandyGFX! I have not finished deciding to use the letters or not, its good to hear a benchmark
I think HardCandyGFX is right, having them cut out of the blocks would give the design a more fluid look.
thanks a lot Wotto,I think like you say it will be more fluid :)
I love the idea, but if it was mine I would be inclined to cut the lettering out of the bottom coloured blocks, instead of having them below.