Hi, kindly critique my work below, is it ready ? suggestions are welcome _





Hi, kindly critique my work below, is it ready ? suggestions are welcome _





thanks slamgirl65
I like the design but I don’t think it needs to crossbones. I also don’t think the bottom and top half connect very well, without the title it’s hard to know what is going on. You should maybe do his hands stretched out infront of him holding skulls to help connect the figure with the skull area. It’s a good start to what could be a very cool design.
Thanks a lot Sir Wotto _ really appreciate the comments. will submit an edited version soon.
here is the revised version:


Im more for losing the skulls at the bottom and moving the cross down (tad smaller). So it’s figure with face skull and the torso to legs fade out with textures
The crossbones might be a bit much, and you could use a bit more variety in the skulls lining the bottom, but the composition looks very good.