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Assassin's Creed Unity T-Shirt Design Contest

Bright Future - Rhinoceros - Critique please!!!

BioWorkZ
posted by BioWorkZ • 1 year ago

Hello, this is my first time posting on DBH for a critique. I’ve been staring at this Rhino for many hours and I want some fresh eyes to critique this image. What works, what doesn’t work. What would you add, subtract. I guess I’m most uncomfortable with the neon colors. I normally use very few muted colors in my designs. Constructive criticism would be appreciated.

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5 Replies

BioWorkZ BioWorkZ Artist from Los Angeles, CA, United States

Here’s the layout:

Here’s the artwork:

thestray thestray Artist from United States

I really love it.
The only thing I can say is that while it’s colorful, but to me it doesn’t really feel “neon”.

BioWorkZ BioWorkZ Artist from Los Angeles, CA, United States

Maybe it’ll look more “neon” in person? I did you the prescribed color palette for this design contest.

thestray thestray Artist from United States

Yeah, I guess it’s how the colors are used and combined, I don’t think I would look at this and ever think to call it “neon”, you know? I think it should be printed regardless though, haha.

nevs nevs Artist from Belgium

awesome job on the rhino.
More africa then 80’s though, maybe it need some kitschy pink?

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