Limited Edition Tank Tops

How to improve it?

Bonaparte
posted by Bonaparte • 1 year ago

Please, give me an advice to improve this project.

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slamgirl65 slamgirl65 Artist from Michigan, United States

I like the figure, but the text is kind of static, as in it doesn’t have a sense of motion. Your text and image are also not doing much more together than occupying the same page. You might want to experiment with different ways to add motion to your text and to integrate it with your image like text wrapping or calligraphy.

Here are some really nice examples:



Bonaparte Bonaparte Human from Romania

I like the last one it is awesome. My idea was to do something like “keep calm and carry on” old British war poster. It is little bit philosophical, without mouth and nose.. for no expression like no feeling carnival mask..

I will try to integrate the picture with the text, I’ll show you the results.. Thank you!

slamgirl65 slamgirl65 Artist from Michigan, United States

I’d be interested to see what you come up with. I think I’m feeling a bit of an urge to work on some typography myself ;)

MrFourFingers MrFourFingers Artist from London, United Kingdom

@Bonaparte Nooooo for the Keep Calm Carry On. There is far too much of that. Slamgirl65 has some better advice

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