Still think this needs something. Thoughts?
I really like the style of the art and you have created a tee with an intriguing theme, always a good start. My only criticism is that the placement is a little disjointed. I know it’s more of a surreal piece but the weighing seems off. If the birds were carrying the bomb and it was tipping like that, the strings would be at the back and there would need to be more birds. It’s a great starting point and I think your style suits DBH very well. Welcome aboard!
Thank you. That was one of the criticisms I anticipated, actually. I appreciate the feedback! I’ll most likely revise accordingly (maybe a few other subtle touches as well) and then submit to see if I can get voted as a winner.
I think it’s an awesome theme, I would maybe make the bomb a bit smaller and like greazilla said, more birds
Better? More birds, more detail on the ropes, etc. Proportions are the same but the weighting seems more in line now.
This is pretty rad!
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