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Assassin's Creed Unity T-Shirt Design Contest

Odin design. Please Critique

Dangerousd1987
posted by Dangerousd1987 • 1 year ago

Please give some constructive criticism.

Thanks!

3 Replies

thestray thestray Artist from United States

My only problem with this is the differences in rendering make it lack in cohesiveness, feels like stuff found from different sources through together. I think this would look a lot better if the same linework approach done to the face/beard was carried throughout the whole design. To me the 3dimensional elements are really throwing this off.

Dangerousd1987 Dangerousd1987 Artist from

thanks @thestray. I wasn’t 100% sure on the helmet and engravings. I can’t seem to get it right with line work. thanks for the comment.

greazilla greazilla Artist from United States

i also think what i like best about this is the hand drawn element that the face has. the rest is all great conceptually but i would like to see it have a more hand-drawn feel to match the face.

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