Limited Edition Tank Tops

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AtomSmasher78
posted by AtomSmasher78 • 1 year ago

What can I do to make this a better shirt? Any ideas are welcome.

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wotto wotto Staff: Creative Director from CA, United States

Hello,
I prefer this design to your other one posted in the other forum post. Again the signature should go and I think the main character should be higher on the tee to make sure he is the focal point. Line-work is key to the success of this design, it currently lacks contrast between the background and the figure. Using darker bolder lines and blocks of black would make that main character stand out way more. It has potential but you need to consider the viewer of the tee and make sure your concept pops right off the chest.

AtomSmasher78 AtomSmasher78 Artist from United States

I love this one. Yeah you must have been reading my mind cause I started working on that right after I posted this one. I will say that the black an white style is my strong point. Thanks for the helpful input

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