please need your critique (my first submision)

indratama
posted by indratama • 2 years ago

http://www.designbyhumans.com/vote/detail/213999

3 Replies

thestray thestray Artist from United States

In the future, it’s wiser to ask for a critique before you submit, that way you can get some feedback that may help you improve the design before it’s already up for voting. I think the design is fine though, good luck.

indratama indratama Artist from Indonesia

thank you
it’s my first join DBH :D

HandsomeJake HandsomeJake Artist from

Yeah, I think this looks good. I’d just say maybe make the tshirt color gray so that you can use the shirt color as part of the design and reduce the amount of in on the shirt. As a tshirt designer, i try to keep the process in which the shirt will actually be printed in mind, as well.

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