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New Work Any Good?!

JulianStarks
posted by JulianStarks • 8 months ago

Hey so I started this design with this great idea but somehow as I started working on it more and more, the original thought faded and i’m just not sure where to go with this or if its good enough to put on a shirt, what do you guys think?

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wotto wotto CA, United States Staff: Creative Director

I like the concept a lot. I think the colors should be darker and more sinister. I also worry that the design is too triangular, maybe try to add details to the edges so its not so rigid. Definitely has potential though.

silence17 silence17 United States Human

I totally agree with darker colors. Maybe even just in the lineart. I think it’s because I like to see contrast and the clothe doesn’t really give that to me. I don’t find the triangular design too bad. But that’s just me.

JulianStarks JulianStarks DMV, United States Artist

@wotto thanks! I definately see your point about darker colors, I have a version of this where the cloth is dark red and the clouds alot darker (I just didn’t know if it was too much) but i’ll work on that side, and I will add more and see what a rounder design looks like. Thanks for the feedback

JulianStarks JulianStarks DMV, United States Artist

@silence17 I agree, after reading your comment I think a darker contrast would really make this thing pop, i’ll add a bit of sinister in there. Thanks!

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