Hey so I started this design with this great idea but somehow as I started working on it more and more, the original thought faded and i’m just not sure where to go with this or if its good enough to put on a shirt, what do you guys think?


Hey so I started this design with this great idea but somehow as I started working on it more and more, the original thought faded and i’m just not sure where to go with this or if its good enough to put on a shirt, what do you guys think?


I totally agree with darker colors. Maybe even just in the lineart. I think it’s because I like to see contrast and the clothe doesn’t really give that to me. I don’t find the triangular design too bad. But that’s just me.
@wotto thanks! I definately see your point about darker colors, I have a version of this where the cloth is dark red and the clouds alot darker (I just didn’t know if it was too much) but i’ll work on that side, and I will add more and see what a rounder design looks like. Thanks for the feedback
@silence17 I agree, after reading your comment I think a darker contrast would really make this thing pop, i’ll add a bit of sinister in there. Thanks!
I like the concept a lot. I think the colors should be darker and more sinister. I also worry that the design is too triangular, maybe try to add details to the edges so its not so rigid. Definitely has potential though.