Hey everyone, here’s a reworked design of my first entry (The first didn’t make the cut). I’m ok with it and all, just want to avoid a second time since the deadline is very near. So let me know what you think with your opnions./crits. Thanks!
Design:
Mock:
No not yet, I’ll most likely sub it Monday. Thanks
very nice!!!
I like it but batman’s right eye seems a little lost.
Thanks Ingkong!
@ Wotto – Good call… I just subbed it this morning too. I’ll edit it and resub.Thanks for the crit!
I think batman looks slightly feminine. I like the design, but as a critique, he looks somewhat feminine, I would make him more rigid and turn those curved lines into straight-ish bends. Also his right arm (left side of image) seems to be a little large in length and maybe a little wide possibly.
@ Ampix0 – Thanks for the crit, I’ll see what I can do
I would say plant his left foot (Viewer’s right) a little more firmly. It kind looks like he’s about to fall over… ;P
@ wotto: Did you mean Batman’s right eye, or the viewer’s right eye? Because I can’t see his LEFT eye, but I can tell his right eye is there…but if you mean the VIEWER’S right eye, then yeah…
@ JustPetrucci – Another valid point. Thanks
Good, only Batman seems to be pulling Catwomans hair
@ pi79 – Got it Thanks!
Thanks again to everyone for the great feedback! I just subbed it and crossing my fingers.
Good luck.
It’s been approved and is up for voting…Thanks again guys!
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awesome work. was this subbed already?