First Design, Critique Please?

lunatorium
posted by lunatorium • 2 years ago

Hello! This is my first design for DBH. It’s called Clockwork Rabbit. I would love any critiques and comments. Thank you!

5 Replies

lunatorium lunatorium Artist from United States

Dang, it squished my second image. I thought it would resize. Sorry! Please just right click on it to see the proper dimensions. I’ll keep that in mind for next time. >.<

AndreC07 AndreC07 Human from Romania

i like it

Havocprime Havocprime Human from California, United States

I dig the design; my only critique would be to try to find a better way to blend the smooth lines (such as on the cog/right side of the face) with the splattered sections. Just so it doesn’t contrast it too much. Other than that it looks solid ;)

lunatorium lunatorium Artist from United States

Thank you both very much!

Cral Cral Artist from Ohio, United States

Try some additional detail on the metal. There is a very easy way to give metallic texture in photoshop with a couple clicks, and that would make it much more realistic.

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