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Newbie seeking advice.

GinnyN
posted by GinnyN • 2 years ago

Basically. This is the first try. Please, please, tell me what’s wrong and how to improve.

Thanks

4 Replies

wotto wotto Staff: Creative Director from CA, United States

I think the design lacks detail and a strong concept. It is hard to tell what the design is because there is little contrast between the green colors. You can clearly draw and work out a composition so I think it is just a case of practice, practice, practice. You should read the 101’s in the submission section as they would help you a lot. Good luck!

GinnyN GinnyN Artist from Chile

Thanks a lot for the comment. I’ll practice a lot as you said :D

GinnyN GinnyN Artist from Chile

Second try with a new design.

BlacKite BlacKite Artist from Munich, Germany

oh hey I actually saw your critique on threadless for the first one.

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