First off being I already have this design I will be referencing up on here, please don’t worry about voting when checking it out for feedback purposes.
Using the following image as a reference, because i believe it to be one of my strongest. (Although the ONE vote has me rethinking that a bit. lol)) I’d like any and all constructive feedback, suggestions and such. The following Flikr links can provide you with a larger better view of the image.
Thanks in advance!
Looking at your second image, I don’t think you really need the dark red outside of the main shape of your design (I mean the shaded burgundy-ish part surrounding everything.) Other than that, You could try maybe a different color background or shirt and see how you like that also.